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Тот самый Хоффман
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hoffmann
Гроза идет по небу
Как трамвай.
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надо писать "транвай". и "волосапед".
это же базовые вещи, в конце концов...
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рифма хорошая, и рисунок. метафора гроза-трамвай тоже терпимо. но всё вместе -- увы, увы..
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Гроза обгадит землю
словно стул
cool.
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11 Aug 2004 01:53 (UTC)
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Гроза ебашит землю
как маньяк.
fuck...
ладно, стихи - не мое.
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какая клевая девица...
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Date: 11 Aug 2004 01:53 (UTC)как маньяк.
fuck...
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